A.M

A.M

A Poem by krystle

it 1A.M
and her mind is dragging her under, yet again.
she doesn't know what it is about the night time
like it's a completely different world
but something about the sunset
that gives her both awe, and fear.
as if her demons set their alarm to come out all at the same time.
and sunrise only makes her feel saddened 
because she knows that'll it'll eventually have to set again
no matter how bad she begs it to stay.
her mind wanders everywhere,
some scary places
and others are so beautiful,
its 1:30A.M
and her mind is wandering to the scary parts

© 2014 krystle


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It was great reading your mysterious writes. Of fright and night time and the awaiting of the sunrise and start of a new day which still scares her anyway for fear grips her as the night falls upon us all.

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

wow, yes I very much enjoy your comments as well! thank you:)
Mysterious dark but beautiful.
I loved it!!!
:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

thank you!
An angst-ridden write, moving away from hope to that dark place.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoy this ; this has a confessional or autobiograhical feeling,so it works as real and sincere, good write

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like the thoughts in the poem. Left the reader with visions and things to ponder. I liked how you had the feel of mystery in the poem.
"but something about the sunset
that gives her both awe, and fear."
Above lines I enjoyed a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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krystle
krystle

coconutcreek, FL



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