Dangerous mystery

Dangerous mystery

A Poem by krystle

He was a mystery waiting to be solved
And she ignored the warning signs

That's the danger in having a fascinated soul,
One thing ignites the fire inside of you

And you lose all control of wanting to know more

© 2015 krystle


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Very true. Short but it explains all. Nice piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Sounds like a bit of an addiction this 'He' - can't get enough -

I enjoyed this - its brief but not lacking at all, I feel I know the writer now and her object of affection and the situ, all in five lines of exquisite writing - well penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

maybe it is maybe it isn't I haven't decided yet. thank you so much!
great Insight on this short write. Many people are mysterious and could be a little creepy at time getting to know a stranger and making new friends is risky business. best of luck trust your heart. Use your head be safe. Love Always Jesus.

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

hahha "a little creepy" thank you for your review!
The poem told the truth. Mystery is a great temptation. When someone or something take our attention. We are done. Good title and amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

yes exactly, thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Intriguing beginning.

NOTES: Feels like there should be more.

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

that's the point of this lol a simple short piece, but duly noted thank you!
MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

yw :)
Good write, a fragment that is enigmatic with style...

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

thank you!
Haa... that's right. very to the point one dear. lovely.

Posted 5 Years Ago


krystle

5 Years Ago

Thank you!

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krystle

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