Mockery

This world has befallen tragedy, we will pull through, bu as long as we do, the world will still die

Starry skies filled with watchful eyes

Will always wish to judge you

Deceitful lies will spell your demise

If that is what it comes to

 

No one cries when peace dies

They only want to make it through

We’ve had our ‘hi’s and now it’s time fro goodbyes

But then what will be left for God to do?

 

Man relies on what he buys

Not what he is put into

A fair size of oblivious guys

Spread truths you refuse to listen to

 

Our replies are delayed by heavy sighs

Saving is something you need to do

Loosen the flies and release the ties

This world we don’t belong to

Author's Note

A bit hard to understand the meaning, but you have to admit it has a beat to it :)

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I really do like this.
It's very strong.
Great work!
My favorite part is:
"Starry skies filled with watchful eyes
Will always wish to judge you
Deceitful lies will spell your demise
If that is what it comes to"
That pulled me right in.
Amazing write!
I really enjoyed reading it.
-Elissa :)

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

caleb, I don't know if you realized what you wrote here. I'm not trying to offend you, but these are powerful words, with powerful meanings, which should be acknowledged. I think It's part about the end of the world, and how it needs to come, or maybe is just pleasantly inevitable, but also how people need to be saved before it is too late. We do not belong to this world, this world does not belong to us. People need to be more worried about how they live the life after the end, instead of holding on to things that don't matter. Yet, it is so hard to be right in a world drenched in wrong. I could be completely wrong, but to me, it seemed to say something, or maybe just a little about this. great poem! you should either submit this one or pain for sale to the young georgia author's. I'm gonna read some more of your work! you're a great writer! =)