Love Letter

 

Love Letter

 

We met when i was young

I didn't know everything about you

But I knew enough to know you were good

We were casual at first

Then i got in that rebellious stage

I broke it off

But you still wanted me

You still were in love

But I ignored it

Doing my own "thang"

Back and forth for some years

We struggled

I cried

Came back

Left again

Your love remained true

You turned your back to teach me

But always kept watch

I never should have left

I should have stayed

Please forgive me

I LOVE YOU GOD

Reviews

[C. C. Burl]

Oh, this is wonderful! I was reading through it thinking, 'What a guy . . . what an INCREDIBLE guy . . .' But no, the end really surprised me, and it is true. What an INCREDIBLE God!! I'm adding this to my favourites. Thank you so so much for sharing. Flora.

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

Bravo!
To me there is nothing more beautiful than a woman that loves God!

[Mysty Rayn]

The most honest love letter I've ever read. Beautiful.

[Mr. Deft Diction]

Yeah, yo...I feel this piece because thru all things in life that leave you and never return....faith has a funny way of becoming center again, eventually.

I like the flow of this, and could tell it came out easy. Nice job!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Nice j ob! yes, at first I thought you were talking about a man, at the end I realized, "Yes, you are talking about a man. But it's the most important man we neglect time after time!!" But he's always there, for you and I, and all his children, with open arms....

I liked this. thanks for sharing.

kena

[Mav]

I loved the twist at the end, Kia. It made so much more sense when I came to realize it was a letter to God. I think a lot of us have this kind of relationship with God. Excellent piece. I enjoyed it very much.

[Cassandra]

Wow. I totally thought this was about a lover from long ago .. and not God .. really great way of portraying the intimacy that religion and faith can really play in one's life. I myself really don't know how I feel about him. I know its not love.. probably more angst, annoyance and questions... and anger.. a good portion of anger.
But here you show how belief in him was something that is in your soul all along despite your rebellions.. nice write.