Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever Trapt and Chained

A Poem by Forever Mine
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Forever lost and trapt

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Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

© 2010 Forever Mine


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The pic was a nice touch, I could imagine it even better, the words you used were great, it had sadness but also inspiration, great work, I liked it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the flow of this and the sadness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is an excellent piece. It sad but elegant in the way you have written it. Great write!!

Voice


Posted 9 Years Ago



Well done. I like this style of writing....

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this poem. The mystery and conflict create a excellent story. I enjoyed the complete poem. The ending made the poem perfect. A outstanding poem. Photo made the words come alive.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hello Katherine,

I will agree with what others have already said, this is deep. Very dream like and surreal, a touching and sad write.

Well done,

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is so heavy I still love this poem cant get it out of my mind

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is nice, i liked how the first two stanzas were written i thought it would have been nice if the rest of the poem was like that, it would've been a bit more powerful in my opinion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is DEFINITELY a favorite of mine. It seems so beautiful..so surreal. Dream-like. The deviant art picture at the top is also amazing. Really goes well with the story the poem's telling. Excellent job. As always.

Posted 9 Years Ago


First verses FANTASTIC!
"Waves crash against the shore
like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

Rain pours down in waves
like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending"

Really liked it!

"I'm trapped here
I cannot break free

Even if my love was...
An archangel"
This poem was fantastically beautiful!

BRAVO!!! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2010
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Tags: Fallen Angels, Angels, Love

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Forever Mine
Forever Mine

Tahlequah, OK



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I'm Katie, i'm 18, and a senior in high school. I'm also happily engaged to my bf of two years. I love writing poetry, and i'm currently working on my book "Fall From Time", the prologue is posted rig.. more..

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