Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever Trapt and Chained

A Poem by Forever Mine

Forever lost and trapt































Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent


Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending


I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys


I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel


My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of


I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid


The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil


He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone


The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more


I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free


Even if my love was....

An archangel 

© 2010 Forever Mine

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The pic was a nice touch, I could imagine it even better, the words you used were great, it had sadness but also inspiration, great work, I liked it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like the flow of this and the sadness.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is an excellent piece. It sad but elegant in the way you have written it. Great write!!


Posted 9 Years Ago

Well done. I like this style of writing....

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like this poem. The mystery and conflict create a excellent story. I enjoyed the complete poem. The ending made the poem perfect. A outstanding poem. Photo made the words come alive.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Hello Katherine,

I will agree with what others have already said, this is deep. Very dream like and surreal, a touching and sad write.

Well done,



Posted 9 Years Ago

this is so heavy I still love this poem cant get it out of my mind

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is nice, i liked how the first two stanzas were written i thought it would have been nice if the rest of the poem was like that, it would've been a bit more powerful in my opinion.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is DEFINITELY a favorite of mine. It seems so surreal. Dream-like. The deviant art picture at the top is also amazing. Really goes well with the story the poem's telling. Excellent job. As always.

Posted 9 Years Ago

First verses FANTASTIC!
"Waves crash against the shore
like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

Rain pours down in waves
like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending"

Really liked it!

"I'm trapped here
I cannot break free

Even if my love was...
An archangel"
This poem was fantastically beautiful!


Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on September 6, 2010
Last Updated on September 6, 2010
Tags: Fallen Angels, Angels, Love


Forever Mine
Forever Mine

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