Beautiful Distraction

Beautiful Distraction

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

You caught me off guard,
You took me by surprise,
The touch of your hand, 
That sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are the perfect match,
The distance is discouraging,
Yet I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
The smell of your hair,
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.
Your warmth, your touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.


And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.

© 2014 Kiera Scanlon


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I liked the title and yet the reflective voice is apparent in the lines...as if you're saying these words in full array...I would edit down certain areas:


You caught me off guard,
You took me by surprise,
The touch of your hand,
That sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are the perfect match,
The distance is discouraging,
Yet still I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
The smell of your hair,
The naughtiness in your smile,
That strength in your stare.

Your warmth, your touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.


And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.

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You caught me off guard,
Took me by surprise,
Touch of your hand,
Sparkle in your eye.

Lying in your arms,
We are a perfect match,
Distance is discouraging,
I am still so attached.

Your breath on my neck,
Smell of your hair,
Naughtiness in your smile,
Strength in your stare.

Your warmth and touch,
All worries subside,
As your sweet lips kiss mine,
Oh, that feeling inside.

And when I look into your eyes,
I see pure beauty with no disguise.


Of course --- this is just impo...do what makes you feel --- you...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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cannot say it clearer than that....LoVe can b all over the place at times but will always COME home

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the truth, especially when it's of the heart. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Awww, I LOVE the reflective tone of voice you used for this poem! It's so sweet! Makes me wish I was in love or something! It's a very pretty and heartfelt poem! Great job on this! :D i loved it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Wow! This is really beautiful and heartfelt. Love it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful, touching and memorable.

Kudos and keep it up.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very nice!! Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh my, I enjoyed this a lot. I liked the scheme and, the flow especially, I found it would be something easy enough to repeat with enough practice, kind of like a rhyme. I love the idea and, meaning within it, I find it very human and, very curious,

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is a beautiful poem. Just the feeling of being loved in a short sweet form.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hi Kiera,
A nice romantic poem. I like the short rapid style.
Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


From the many I've read here in a short time, you have a knack for rhythmic flow and word choice. Very good writing Kiera.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

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