Reflection

Reflection

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

I am the erotic sensation that tingles your spine,
The provoking fascination that confuses your mind.

I am a creature of the word.
Which word?
Every word.

I am the scars than run deep and stain your soul,
The amplified misunderstandings of a past untold.

I am the spine, the blade, the sharpest point,
May I show you my neatly decorated knife?

© 2013 Kiera Scanlon


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I am the erotic sensation that tingles your spine,
ME: *thinks deeply*....SUGAR???

The provoking fascination that confuses your mind
ME: *keeps thinking*


May I show you my neatly decorated knife?
ME: You can show me yours if I show you mine!!!!!! :D

TEEHEE AWESOME!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Sounds kind of like a riddle. What is it?
Now I'm going to be up at night trying to figure it out.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Love the rhymes, my favourite times. ❤

Posted 6 Years Ago


it had a great hidden meaning and the mystery was maintained till the end. reader would get confused between good and evil character of that reflection. " i am a creature of the word" is where i felt it had a dark side too , a dark side which is hidden in this poem. great rhyme schemes and splendid use of words ....enjoyed reading it ... keep smiling peace :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I loved everything about this poem. To the extent that I can't point out a favorite part. Maybe that last stanza! The choice of every word is brilliant and the effect is powerful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


wow 10/10, I love this so much

Posted 6 Years Ago


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that was really really great. your really good. i mostly love the part that says "the amplified misunderstandings of a past untold". i dont know why i like it but it just draws me in and latches onto my brain and m like then stuck in an ever constant spiral of thought, i know its stupid to say but your writing just keeps me thinking and i cant help it. i loved this and i cant wait to read a ton more of your writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Creature of the word or creator? I got confused.
Very good theme and very fitting vocabulary. Stunning write:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


i read the poem but i am sorry i just could not get its meaning....and according to other reviewers it is amazing so please help me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kiera Scanlon

3 Years Ago

Haha that's no problem, it's basically a reflect of myself, was an odd, slightly dark, misunderstood.. read more
I was nicely surprised reading this piece. I liked the sensual words you chose to convey your point. I enjoyed the read Kiera!

~Stefanie

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2012
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Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

waterford, Ireland



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