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A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

You are the pain,
I have learnt to endure,
My weakest temptation,
Awakening my hidden sensations,
Infesting my mind,
With drowning memories,
Tales of happily ever afters,
Interlocking dreams,
Destiny,
Disaster?
On the inside I am slowly weeping,
But on the outside,
I pose,
Carved on my face,
A smile of determination,
Encorcelled eyes, consumed lust,
Nothing,
But,
Illusions.

© 2014 Kiera Scanlon


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There is no repetition to this but you made this with a pretty different approach, and the way its written (physically) is simply attention-seeking. That neon green behind black. Great writing! This is deep.

Posted 7 Years Ago


The color blinded me, like a flashing neon sign... look at me, look at me... this is rich in imagery.. I especially like the first three lines. Your poetry just keeps getting better and better.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nothing.
But.
Illusions.

That has got to be my favorite part. I love your poems and this is not an exception ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


sheesh! don't know how you do it ... your poetry consumes me in layers of psychology, darkness, sex, hopelessness, danger, and this innate power.... the colors put my eyes in a whirl; had to search "Encorcelled" ... ( i am ..can i say .."older" ... aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrg!) and had no inkling of them ... so have to add hip to my impressions of this poem ... as i have said before .. your style is very addictive .. you just keep on writing K ...
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


"Illusions" one of favorite words to write with...I always love to see that in a poem. Well done. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Illusions.
We can use much word to describe that.
N you description was very good
^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


I pose.
Carved on to my face,
A smile of determination,
Encorcelled eyes, Consumed lust.
Nothing,
But,
Illusions.

Break your illusions by face them. Beautifully write dear. Loving and enjoying your art.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Break those stupid illusions down! Yup. There are always going to be better days.

Posted 7 Years Ago


no one said it would be easy, life sucks, so have a lolly pop

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great work, Thank you for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

waterford, Ireland



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