As I Fall

As I Fall

A Poem by Queen of Hearts

I find it hard
To go on
I am too weak
I am not strong

My world is a mess
From up to down
I can not handle this stress
I am astound

I finally found
My terrible match
I can not take
This eventful batch

The pain is over-bearing
Taking me apart
And I feel the world staring
As I fall

© 2011 Queen of Hearts

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I disagree. I like it a lot!! Especially since I feel like I can relate sometimes. For that, I give you a 98 :]

Posted 9 Years Ago

some of the rhyming seems a bit forced..but overall a good idea.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on March 25, 2011
Last Updated on March 25, 2011


Queen of Hearts
Queen of Hearts


I love to paint and write stories. Sometimes I just sit and write all day, trying to get out of this land and into another. I love the smell of the paper as I write, the soft etching sound of the penc.. more..