Wind Of wisdom

Wind Of wisdom

A Poem by Lover Of Words

The wind conceals my secrets 
Speaks to me like lost love 
Holds my pain 
But justifies the wisdom 
The wind carries me to places 
No other creature can consume 
Consume my bodies weakness 
And keeps my feet on solid ground 
But carries me way 
To my searcher of freedom 
Faith holds me tight 
To keep my life at ease 
Takes my wings to a calm place 
The wind conceals the out come of these wings 
I hold closely to my soul 
My wings of wisdom 
My wings of life 

© 2013 Lover Of Words


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Profound poem Kelsey. Great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Much appreciated baby thank you
I found this so deep, and beautiful dear Kelsey! I read it as I'm almost too a little particle of dust among the fields... a transparent and well written short poem!


- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear Elisa i appreciate it so much

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome Kels :Dx
Beautiful. It flows as does the wind... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

This one came out as if it was meant to be... I thank you my lovely friend
I love the title. A beautiful write. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy. Nice use of metaphor and simile. Nice personification of the wind. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance. Good closing lines. Well penned and a much enjoyed read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Wow what a review i thank you so much for taking the time to read :)
ShelleyA

10 Years Ago

You're welcome and my pleasure.
this is truly one of the best pieces i have seen from you in some time. nicely expressed!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Take my pen away from me it would be like taking my heart
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

if you take away a poet's pen, he or she will merely write with their heart....
Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Yes this is true my friend
"The wind conceals my secrets
Speaks to me like lost love
Holds my pain
But justifies the wisdom "
That is some good poetry ...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much :) thanks for reading
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:).........

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Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..

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