Evil Shadow

Evil Shadow

A Poem by Lover Of Words

Casting an evil touch on my skin 
The glowing eyes 
Felt watching over me 
A chilling spell cast 
The cuts return to my body 
Bloody and raw 
Deep and ridged 
Cries of fright 
Says my shaking body 
Behind the closed door
The evil shadow emerges
Lifting my soul out of my sleeping body 
The eyes of the evil cast 
Grow wider and wider 
Casting a suicidal spell
Leaving it unknown 
Will my mind find the light 
Away from this evil shadow 
Under minding the spell
Unleashing these fearful dreams 
Saving my body from harm 
This evil shadow 
Casting a evil spell
Upon my life 
I stand in a corner 
In sheer fright  

© 2013 Lover Of Words


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Scary stuff Kelsey.....Brrrrrr.

Great read though

I wondered about CAST and CASTING being so close in the text and I also wondered if you meant to write Under minding instead of undermining......

Posted 10 Years Ago


You tell a real-life nightmare. A very effective and emotional write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Reminds me a little of "the Dark Passenger" in the Dexter series, only self inflicting rather than outwardly focused...
You give the reader a real sense of the fright felt.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you David
Powerful poem.. very well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear
Wow! Kelsey! That sent shivers down my spine! Extremely chilling! Excellent!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Not a fan of evil, I have to say this was written extremely vivid, darkly effective and equally chilling.
Thanks for the share.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very dark and deeply created...great job

Posted 10 Years Ago


The title caught my eye, so I read it. I rarely read poetry, and this was very good. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Well i thank you for stopping by.
Very deep and dark Kelsey. Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Heavy like acid rain. Good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much

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Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..

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