Un-caring Eyes

Un-caring Eyes

A Story by Kacie Delane Davis
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a flash fiction I wrote at 1 am

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She laughed a dry, humorless laugh. “I tried to warn you. Didn’t I? Didn’t I try!?! Answer me!!” She screamed

           Silence.

“Answer me! Why won’t you say something! Stop looking at me like that! Please…! Please…!” she sobbed. “I can’t bare that look in your eyes.”

She pointed the bloody knife as she spoke. “Don’t be angry with me! It’s not my fault!” She held the knife over her wrist. Nothing only two judging eyes staring back at her.

“You think I won’t!!” A gasp passed her lips as the blood flowed out. She held the knife at her throat. “Say you love me one last time…..please….”

                                Nothing.

“Fine!” She drew the blade across her throat. The blood poured out of her rapidly . She dropped to her knees and gazed into those cruel, un-caring eyes. The sound of her gurgling blood drowned out her many pleas for forgiveness.

There she died before the glazed over eyes of her now dead, once precious lover.

 

© 2013 Kacie Delane Davis


Author's Note

Kacie Delane Davis
let me know if you can think of a better title lolz, because I sure can't

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Added on October 13, 2013
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Kacie Delane Davis
Kacie Delane Davis

city, TN



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I am odd girl, who loves to write and wants to make a name for herself. I enjoy reading and writing. Fantasy and fiction are my favorite genres. They give me the chance to have a blissful escape. i h.. more..

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