A Poem by Invisible Ink

This is a poem I wrote this week and I thought I would add this as my first piece on here as it fits my usual style of writing.

sometimes everything is a pulsing moment,
filling the night,
not yet woken into blinding sight,
not yet giving way to darkness.
as opposites fall into repulsion.
what can I do, as the world shrinks;
devouring the earth outside our closed doors.
how can it be so slowly simple?
our living death a masterpiece in four dimensions.
even the title is not our own,
desire unfulfilled

© 2010 Invisible Ink

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Invisible Ink
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wonderfull poem
Its filled with emotion
:) Amazing
Your Friend Demi

Posted 13 Years Ago

Holy crap! this poem is so awesome, it hurts! Nice job! I really like your detailed use of vocabulary :) All, in all, a very good read :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow,it kinda made my head spin a little, this is really good!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago

very nice :] i liked it. i could really feel the emotion that you were trying to betray. very very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago

i love it

Posted 13 Years Ago

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5 Reviews
Added on February 9, 2010
Last Updated on February 10, 2010
Tags: desire, longing, emptiness, unfulfilled, death, life, night, moment


Invisible Ink
Invisible Ink

Belton, TX

I don't really like being judged by my age, so obviously I am young. I really spell either so thank god for computers. I am a black-belt but am too sick to continue training so i take comfort in my wr.. more..

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