Preston

Tonight I went out and sat in a lawn chair

And while I sat there looking at the stars

I thought about you

I thought about what we used to be

And it hurt

Because I lost you

And you forgot about me

Reviews

[Jacob Clifford]

Relatable. Good presentation and sense of scale with this poem. It shows what needs to be there without lagging on anything.

[ReedWrite]

Nice piece. Simple, yet poignant. The reader feels your pain and loss. You captured the voice you needed in just a few well-penned words. Great job.