UNTITLED 1

I have no idea what to name this. Maybe after I post part 2 I'll have a better idea, but does anyone have any ideas for a name?

Tears won't come out anymore

Well I used to cry over every little thing

So now it takes something big

To make my eyes rain.

 

I slowly realize that I have never

ever told anyone my story before

Not because I didn't want to,

but because I didn't know it yet.

 

I didn't want all that attention on my pain.

It seems pointless when I here all the stories

About abused children and horrid childhoods

My pain gets ignored. And I understand why.

 

But I know it now, that pain that overwhelmes me

That hollowness- the emptiness I now sense.

My story, I am starting to understand

But it's not a pretty one.

 

I am a writer, I write what I feel deep down inside.

That's why my writing is so dark and sad.

No one ever wakes up a realizes that secretly,

deep down inside they were happier then ever.

 

There are so many things going through my head

I can barely get them down on a page

This raw emotion surges through me,

If I can just  get my hands to stop shaking.

 

What if I forget my story? I tell myself I'm waiting for you,

But the cold truth is that I don't have anyone else who understands

To be honest I've never missed you more.

I need you here, I'm ready to talk, but you're so far away...

Author's Note

One of two. This will not be open for editing other then grammar, spelling and punc. This is a very, very sincere poem that I really had to open up to write. Please don't be too harsh.

Reviews

[The Watcher]

This is a really deep poem, but I can sense and understand just how terrible your pain is. Sometimes we poets can only express certain feelings through our writings, but even still, not all of us can comprehend the emotions we experience throughout our lives. You seem to realize why your pain is the way it is, and I believe you have done a superb job in integrating and relaying this experience into your poetry. This is a beautiful poem, and I hope you can rediscover happiness again someday. Good luck, and kudos to you. =)

100/100

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

wow i really enjoyed this great job!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks chica!

[harry]

its not long at all .....good job ...this piece is filled with emotions ..

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you sir

[harry]

my pleasure

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Wow. This captures my emotions perfectly. This was Great and not even that long. Awesome

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much!