UNTITLED 2

..name ideas?

Then there's my friend- she never shares

Like me, but even worse, keeps everything inside

I want to be there for her, but she tells lie after lie

The attitude and drama she posses, actually, clings to.

 

I could never talk to anyone before

I've only recently opened up.

My spiritual gift; a blessing and a curse

To see things others don't until it's to late.

 

And you- you've shared more then I thought.

But what if you keep telling until it's nothing special?

My listening is nothing special? It was too late for me

well at least you got the help you needed.

 

Everyone is always laughing, always so happy

Even the brat pretends to know what's happening

But I don't know. Still stuck here.

Feeling all to alone. Discluded.

 

I find myself clinging to others and their needs.

I'll take a perfectly normal stranger, get to know them

Help them along as much as I can, just waiting to see

if the advice I give will ever repair what I've broken.

 

So when I curl up in a ball tonight, crying out in pain,

letting the hurt leak out of me, it won't be enough.

I'll cry myself asleep without a word, no one to help.

Being the follower no one will remeber when the battle is over.

 

And it will remind me of the last night and the night before.

Because everytime the sun goes down, it's the same

Painful, lonely, then dead sleep. Ignore it all tomorrow.

But really, I need someone. I need you! Come hide me from reality

 

Because as my trusted ones dwindle,

So do the smiles that keep it all hidden.

 

Author's Note

Two of two. What do you think?

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

Ouuu very nice, very wel nice indeed."Because everytime the sun goes down its the same." I love that.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you very much :)

[Pax]

very emotional and nice flow. enjoyed it.

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks

[Olivia Marie]

I absolutely loved it :) It was deep, and emotional, and well put together. It was like an equation perfectly put together :) Loved it :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you so much!

[That_Girl]

Nicely written. Emotional but not sappy or anything like that. Strong. :)

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thank you :)

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

i loved this it was beautifully written! it was enjoyable to read and the word choice was brilliant! great work i hope to see more very soon :D

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks a lot!

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

no problem any time haha the pleasure is all mine lolz i stole that from my friend

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Haha! Was it harry? he does that too

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

yeah lolz

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:P

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

haha but anyways this was a great write!

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

Thanks chicky! I really appreciate it :)

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

no problem you know i love your poetry :P

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

*blushes* awww thanks

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

anytime :P