Forget Me Not

Forget Me Not

A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
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I don't want to be forgotten. Only loved.

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© 2012 ♪The Girl Next Door♪


Author's Note

♪The Girl Next Door♪
In time you will forget me
Don't deny it, you know it's true.
We may have lost what we used to be.
But all I ever did was love you.

It's hard when I look back to those times.
Now I'm nearly broken hearted.
Forced to sputter it out in rhymes.
I'm right back where I started.

I thought this would be better for me
Letting go and trying to live a little
But part of my heart is still stuck, you see
Now my emotions are nothing more then a riddle.

He told me his secrets after not to long
I brought him up, told him his place
But when in return he asks what's wrong
All I can say is 'Nothing.' With a fake smile plastered to my face.

So as I lay crying in my bed
With all the love and pain you brought
The love you showed, the things you said,
just please. Forget me not.

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Being forgotten by a loved one only means it wasn't true love. That's how I look at it, anyways. And if things didn't work out for you two, that means the real thing still awaits you.
As for the poem itself, I really liked it. A rhyming scheme like this one isn't easy to pull off without ruining the rhythm, and you've managed to do an excellent job.

P.S. I really don't know who could forget you, Kenzie. Even though I know you just over the internet, I can see how amazing you are, and meeting you in person would be the ultimate awesomness.

Posted 7 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tom. I really needed that right now :')
Tomislav Petricevic

7 Years Ago

Anytime, bestie. :D
♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

:D!


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Wow, this was a beautiful piece of writing. Kinda sad, but I like that because it really portrays an honest emotion. Great job :):)

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :D
Beautifully written,yet saddening... ``If one you love has forgotten you,they were never met for you.'' ( A rhyme I made.) If it's meant to be,it's meant to be. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
 Soul Fire

7 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
OOOOOOOOOOOHHH that was good

I wish I could write a poem like that.

Boss mode

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks man :)
Steven Cash

7 Years Ago

No problem at all
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AK
Wow! This poem is brilliant! Absolutely wonderful:) the rhyming scheme is so well done and flows so easily, maintaining the beauty and eloquence of the poem. The title is very well chosen and your feelings are expressed wonderfully. Keep writing!
:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
AK

7 Years Ago

Anytime:)
some things are never forgotten, and the things that are usually aren't that important.

Posted 7 Years Ago


wow that was really powerful
great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kerri Hart

7 Years Ago

No problem u deserve it
♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Aw :) thanks again
Kerri Hart

7 Years Ago

;)
I loooooooooove the last stanza! very creative to use the name of a flower like this!

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks
I don't think anyone wants to be forgotten and yet our human fear generates such despair in believing it is possible. This was a great poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much
A far better rhymer then I could ever hope to be :P

Trust and love are two different things but it's hard to make one thing work without the other. It seems to me that in this poem, the person didn't trust but loved dearly. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
that... was beautiful. this is real talent. the pace, the rhyme; everything is perfect

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much

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