Some Times

Some Times

A Poem by ♪The Girl Next Door♪
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Um...poetry?

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© 2012 ♪The Girl Next Door♪


Author's Note

♪The Girl Next Door♪
Sometimes the pain makes me want to fall
Sometimes I don't know what's the right call
Sometimes your voice sticks in my ears
Sometimes he's more then what appears

Sometimes I can tell you
Sometimes my heart runs away
Sometimes I'm a child too
Sometimes, could you come out to play?

Sometimes my thoughts float way out afar
Sometimes my heart reaches out to shooting stars
Sometimes I wish you'd love me back
Sometimes my love gets way off track

Sometimes I try to make sense of this madness
Sometimes I let wander just to watch where it goes
Sometimes I try to hard to block out the sadness
Sometimes it's the thing you can't see that really shows

Sometimes my mind moves slower then my legs to the door
Sometimes the shit hits the fan before my body hits the floor

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Its wonderful!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


My favorite was the first stanza, but I can relate to the entire poem. Amazing Job! can't wait to read more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sometimes i just wanna read your poems:-):-):-D.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Last line was epic, it stuck out to me. I could see this being a type of song, it has a certain beat to it, you know? I like it, your repetition is right on target as well.

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
RachelReaper

7 Years Ago

:D
♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

:)
I love it!!! Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Wow, just wow... This is really amazing and strong.
I can relate this... I can relate it all.
Great job!
Thanks for sharing!
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
this poem is crazily good lol sometimes i love other peoples poems more than anything else

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Aw! You're too sweet :) Thank u
Toni Blackerby

7 Years Ago

ur welcome
Sometimes I read a poem and it motivates me to try to write poetry. and anyone who knows me knows I am a novelist not a poet. Lol this was one of those times. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Sometimes I'm insanely jealous of your writing skills. :D
No, seriously, this is a great poem! It had a song-like feel to it that I really loved, and the emotions were captured really well.

Great work, and thanks for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review :D
Sometimes repetition is good:) One of those writes that makes you feel good when you're done..

Posted 7 Years Ago


♪The Girl Next Door♪

7 Years Ago

Thanks!
The Analog Kid

7 Years Ago

YW :D

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