The Unsung Song

Silence can be defeaning

The silence can be heard,

when you scream silently,

Deafeaning, heart pounding,

But can't make a sound,

Sanity of mine,

keeping at bay inside,

The bullet is in sight,

with no escape in light,

I close my eyes and pray to disappear,

Each moment I wonder,

Does the heart grow fonder,

in the presence of something rare,

The silence is loud,

sreaming inside,

tearing me inside out,

A hand writ with blood.

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[Fieora Andros]

Honestly I am a silence lover, and i loved the way you expressed that how silence can be loud. And how screaming inside tears our heart out. I loved the ending. It's so abrupt and so unexpected which is the most beautiful thing about the poem. The last line depicts all the emotions you had while writing this piece.
I would love to read more. :')

[Abhishek Asthana]

A very thoughtful write... explained a real significance of silence... nicely written... !! Keep writing and sharing !!

[light and ashes]

A very interesting write.... I enjoyed it a lot.