The battle Within

Everyone has something or the other to complain about their life.

This age of lonliness,
Never addressed
I was never so helpless,
This state of unrest

Scarce Emotions,
Like the blank, dark space,
Only abundance,
Rage and hate

Fighting alone, in the dark night,
No less than a Knight,
Enemies:- Rage, hate and unrest,
Never bothered about being correct.
Let alone best

Best,
Best or worst,
Lying on one's crest,
Never correct,
Nor trust

I don't know what is like to be loved
I don't know what is like to be adored
I don't know what is like to be cared
I'll never be alright!

But,
Never realised the beauty within,
So engrossed on the outside,
The truth slowly sinking in,
the beauty that reflects our true side.

Love, care, life,
Were the words that I most hated,
though I pretend that I look for them,
Searching, but never finding it.

Never realised that they were within me,
always,
Lurking, hiding, in the shadows,
Shadows of hate, rage and curse.
growing within me,
ever strong,

I fought, fought against the heavenly force
then realised that I'm fighting on the wrong side,

and screamed:

I know now what is like to be loved
I know now what is like to be adored
I know now what is like to be cared
I will be alright!
 

Author's Note

he he ha ha! I laughed my head off when I wrote this. Didn't make any sense to me. See if you can make anything out of this.

Reviews

[Imperfection]

A wide variety of emotions here.
I am not sure if I understand the ending as you intend it to be. But this does a good job of expressing the conflict and helplessness that one faces in life's journey.


Considering what I have read of you, this isn't one of your best but I don't think its bad either. I certainly didn't feel like laughing, at least.

[Starting Over]

It was a little crazy! But Hey I loved it!

♥ Lacey!

Ps my friends call me Aleera but atleast it is just me love

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is indeed a very descriptive piece of writing and as a reader I can sense your genuine and true emotions in this one.
I found a range of mixed emotions in it - sorrow, sadness, despair, dejection, rage, anger and lastly but most importantly HOPE!
This poem deals about what and how we all face different emotions in our life, often we feel despondent and rejected and often clouds of hate surrounds our sky but in the end if we will count upon ourselves then we can develop a rainbow in that same sky!

"I fought, fought against the heavenly force
then realised that I'm fighting on the wrong side," - Loved these lines a lot, as they are so thoughtful and inspiring!

The poem also ends up beautifully with such a great conclusion.

Great work :)