☁ ☁ – cloudy – cloud – dark clouds

☁ ☁ – cloudy – cloud – dark clouds

A Poem by 7ue

i'm getting better at this, i think

With blue blooded apparel, my tees make statements.
I ♥ MoNeY foreshadow rainy events.
Red up eyes tinged with twisted lightening rods;
crisscross intersections �"
irises wide �"
with retinal surprise.

Green rooted veins tangled in muddy skin.
Burnt black ash tipped for death.
A wraiths impact crashed &
revolted again.

Rebooted similar computers still confuse you.
But me; technical wizardry is my forte.
I don’t pay for anything.
Cash is extinct.
All black everything
consumers need to rethink.

Call backs getting dog groomers
caught out on the brink.
How’d they manage to rob man
on the way to the ice rink?

On a quick link with this piece
from down the street.
Still haven’t found a willing speaker
to compete.
My typography is concrete,
can’t defeat a repeat offender
my crimes mental I stay experimentally
abusing and confusing the losers in the scene
can’t be seen, you seem unclean
I mean please, I’ve foreseen the end of the beginning
and it’s not a rainbow,
kaleidoscopic optic coshes are white as pages
everything in this life costs hatred.

I don’t need to say I’m a boss,
an apostate by nature I’m God’s favorite savior,
killing misbehavior daily.
Strangers and private callers get ignored
carry the one and keep catty stored
in books for wet days.
I don’t play games I am one,
naked twister stained with a snake and ladders,
tight rope walking stalkers
hocked the lot for a taste of jaw dropping frosting,
stay positive.

Polar ice caps locked from the top I’m unstoppable.
Abel and Cain sacrificed their father’s name,
immortality is a legacy that not everyone can claim.
But who said I was the same,
f**k fame,
I’m a shaman ashamed.

© 2010 7ue

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Wow! A powerful vortex of words, colors and imagery, pulling the reader into this jaw dropping, writhing labyrinth of thoughts - fantabulous compilation!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Word usage, and rhyme are used so well in this poem of twisting imagery, and thought. impressive

Posted 10 Years Ago

Impressive word twisting... all it needs is a Neptunes beat. Love the creativity, you spin a lot of thoughts but never lose control. Nice work...

Posted 10 Years Ago

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A whirlwind of slamtastic proportions!!! Loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago

exotic spin through the human helix like a maypole to swim round in ribbons~ this is an absolute mind bending delight!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love it! But I need a drink after reading this. It's so creative. Thanks for sharing it with me.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Now...if ever I said a piece of music or a piece of poetry was on point, this right here would definitely fit the build. Awesome work, nice flow.

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Added on November 5, 2010
Last Updated on November 5, 2010



Croydon, London, United Kingdom

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