a blissful beginning

a blissful beginning

A Poem by Kgosi

 

They called it wording in the midst of phrases…
Moles of molded minds that sprint to print majestic tunes…
They called her poetry…
A pottery with words that would sell your soul and free you mind to word-string that sting you along…
and aloft you go.
Brittle sweet memories entertain her terrain,
The reign of her ringing voice-
And my head his vacuum to all this s**t…
Mind spitted her voice kisses my psyche,
Now my blood has given birth to her existence,
- When for she appears it run…
It whales for her touch,
 Her voice makes me sick…
She’s so deep,
I weep.
Stop this…
Words again… and again hearts beats that echo her stature…
 I have high blooded pressure,
High minded measures that mat these matters…
S**t this rhymes…
Now I feel like a poet with a pot of words in his head…
Hey stop this…
Poetry calls…
She appears and my blood oozes words of her existence…
This body is her-
Is she he?-
Is she me?-
Or am I he?-
 
It is …..
 A blissful beginning.

© 2009 Kgosi


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nice....it flows well.... i like the diction

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good rhythmic writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it may be that I'm a simpleton, but this one seems complex in a way that passes right over my little head. beautiful though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

O! Very good! I love how unconventionally structured it is. Flowing and just put together so well.
Thanks for the FYI on this poem!
LC :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kgosi
Kgosi

MAFTOWN, South Africa



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