love remains

love remains

A Poem by khalid
"

we need to love each other

"

 

 

 

I don’t care if you are tall or short

I don’t care if you are thin or fat

I don’t care how handsome you look

I don’t care for the religion to which you belong

I don’t care whatever it is..your mother tongue

I don’t care for your political opinions, either right or wrong

Since languages can be acquired

 the (good) is what all religions seek

Even appearance can be changed

Political opinions are always fake

but Since you are a human being,

In your heart and soul, you'd better navigate

And rather than you stay complaining your fate,

find your hidden treasures to feel how much it is unique

that you can love, you can be loved, you can have a mate

and however the problems you face, there is always a gate

out of your problems, to go on your life, and it is never late

for anybody to collect themselves, to fix their remains

if they can forget hatred and remember that..

only love can survive, only love remains

(with love to everyone views or reads)

 

 

© 2012 khalid


Author's Note

khalid
mind to sheet, forgive mistakes please

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love the poem! and the shape of it :) ahhh loove

Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

thank you so much..
God bless you for preaching peace.
Humanity comes first then other things like race,religion follows.and humanity is Love.

Great poem Khalid.

Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

thank you man
We need your words... we need to give our lives out of love above all else.. Only then will the world truly see peace... and each home as well. Thank you for your inspiration, my friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

thyank you so much for the deep understanding of the message of the poem..
i like how this is shaped like a human being...and describes the shape of a human's love and how it can shape another.

Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

beauty is in the eye of beholder, thank you
jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

that is true...and it is what's inside that is most important...
This is great! i really liked the note of truth in your writing! I can really relate to this! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

thanks alot
MissEpic2902

8 Years Ago

Your welcome! :)
this is soo inspiring...i dont believe in love that much but this makes me want to change my mind

Posted 8 Years Ago


absolutely


Posted 8 Years Ago


The text is rich with complexities and the ironies have been solve by the unifying theme in the end. If you may allow me to go through the detail this are the complexities that I found :

I don’t care whatever it is..your mother tongue
Since languages can be acquired
I don’t care for your political opinions, either right or wrong

and the unifying theme that resolve the complexities are :

love
knowledge acquisition
acceptance

But in reality I think it is a big question if the unifying theme can resolve the stated complexities so as a whole I find the the world created inhere as very idealistic. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


"for anybody to collect themselves, to fix their remains

if they can forget hatred and remember that..

only love can survive, only love remains"~ This is "love" personified. What a lovely write!.... a beautiful thing to encapsulate within our hearts...


Posted 8 Years Ago


khalid

8 Years Ago

thank you som much for the nice review..
i think it is important to love yourself and forgive yourself in order to be open to love and know that you are worth loving. great message, gives reassurance and something to reflect upon.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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