My Mother

mother is the greatest

 

 

My mother;

You have always been there,

When no other body was.

You have been caring without waiting,

Me to promise,  I'm  only yours.

 

You taught me how to love.

You taught me how to live.

I could be a man because of you

 

Let me sit under your knees.

I would like to kiss your hands, to kiss your toes

But i know, you are too kind to do.

Then let me, kiss your forehead,

Appologizing for anything i did,

That ever annoyed you.

 

Sorry for every time, i went out,

Letting you worry and doubt

For what may have happened, to me

Sorry for every time i was that tough

Sorry for every time you were talking and i said "enough".

Sorry if i ever was a bad boy.

 

Mama, mum, mummy, mamma. Ommey, my mother ma mere;

I love that ( m) sound because of you, my dearest dear.

Because your prayers are my real saviour,

Because under your feet, lies the heaven

 

I promise to do my best,

To make you proud of me

But if i fail,please, forgive me

I know, as always, you will do

To make me always proud of it,

Being the son,

Of the greatest mom,

The world has ever known

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

nothing can be ever said about mothers and their rights like that said by Prophet Mohamed(PBUH); If you kept standing up, for all your life long, holding your mother on your back, you would still have paid NOTHING of what you owe to her.

Reviews

[Marie]

A wonderful tribute to your mother. I know she is proud of you.

[khalid]

thank you so much..

[stars are far]

That was so emotional .. Thanks for publishing such nice thing :)

[khalid]

thank you

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What a heartfelt tribute, Khalid!!
Such a wonderful way to express your love and devotion for the woman who brought you into this world!...Love and respect, something unconditional...priceless is a mother's love, and you have given a wonderful gift of a son's gratitude.
Great write!

[khalid]

thank you Sweet Robbie..

[Robbie~xoxo~]

my pleasure...such a sweet read, my friend! ~xo~ :)

[Roxii]

That is the sweetest thing that I could ever read...It made my heart swell..hopefully my child feels that way about me.(:

[khalid]

thank you so much. im sure your child will..it must be a sweet child for a sweet mom

[Mockingbird]

this would make a perfect card for mother's day...do you have mother's day? well, on her birthday then. it would be a surprise at how much she is appreciated because to her she's always only played a role as a mother bringing up her son as best she could with what she has. very nice tribute to your mom.

[khalid]

thank you Moc, yes we have mothers day here on March 21

[Renée]

I hope you share this with your Mother..she would cherish this as she does you.. all her life ! What a heartfelt poem to raise her up !
and you know what... you will always be her little boy..no matter how big or old you are...there is not a place in the house you grew up that she does not see in her little ones crawling or running about...Blessings & a friend's love to your Mom ( :

[khalid]

thank uou so much for the nice review. and yes, even for me as a son, i see myself as a young boy when it is to mother..

[Renée]

I think we all become that way around our mothers.. I am sure she is very proud of the man you have become !

[Frieda P]

Sounds as if this was written from the little boy within yourself, coming from a deep place of love and gratitude. Nice tribute to motherhood, and your Mom would be proud....sweet read.

'Sorry if I ever was a bad boy'....

ha, as mother's we forgive those silly moments, it's part of growing up... that made me smile. :-)

[khalid]

thank you for the nice review, however the son becomes old, he stays forever a young boy in his mother's eyes...i really meant to write it as a young boy because at this life stage mother feels her son is the closest so i wanted her to feel that

[Frieda P]

My sons are always 'young boys' in my eyes, no matter how old they are...I understand totally, I see it from both sides...my pleasure khalid.

[khalid]

i wanted to say to you, happy mother's day in advance but i hesitated because i didnt know if you have kids, i feared i may hurt you if you dont...since you have two lucky sons, Happy Mother's Day, Sweet Mother

[Frieda P]

So sweet of you! I have 'three' sons! None of which write poetry, I will consider this my poem for Mother's Day!

[khalid]

it is a great honor for me if you consider such an inferior poem as your gift on Mother's Day...that is really sweet of you. to correct, lucky three sons since you are the mother.

[Frieda P]

haha, I will relay that message to them! :-)

[khalid]

i dont think they need me or anyone to tell them that, im sure they aready know.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful poem. Mother's are the person who loved us in good and bad times. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[khalid]

thank you for the nice review, you have been always a great support

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Every words captivate the beauty of the special person in our life. Pure,Honest thoughts. I like it very much, I can relate from this poem how I treasure my mother too. Perfect writing! Thanks for sharing.

[khalid]

we can never love anybody truly if we dont love our mothers. since you are a sensitive poet, im sure you do