Apart

A Poem by KhelticRyder

Once we were lovers, not a day would pass without a soft word to one another.

Somehow, somewhere, someway we seemed to have drifted apart.

Never ending, never really beginning…simply apart.

© 2009 KhelticRyder

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Mysty Rayn

This reached into me chest and touched my heart. Crazy, I know. Sometimes you just read things that really touch you. This piece did that for me. So much said in so little words.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~*~Peace Keeper~*~

I like it...it is short and sweet...and to the point.
Great Job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whispercherise

stirring.....something most can relate too.......poignant......."sighs"

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shinybluestars03

Short but with a meaningful message that im sure
many people can relate too.
Great poem you did a great job in
stating what you wanted in a few lines.
Thanks for sharing, keep on writing

Best wishes

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 21, 2009

Author

KhelticRyder

Salem, OR

About

Writing is my passion, it's not so much that I love to write...or even like it for that matter. I HAVE to write. It's just as much a need for me as is air, food or water. People often ask me "When did.. more..