Dont Forget Me

Dont Forget Me

A Poem by shadow night

Don’t forget me,

Thiugh you are gone forever.

I couldn’t give you every thing,

 That I wanted to.

I hope you see my face and be reminded,

No matter what I love you.

I wish you happiness,

For ever more.

We had fun,

But it didn’t last,

I will remember how we was before.

Never mind what otheres say

I wish nothing,

But for you to be happy.

I want you to live

As long as you can.

And I hope that we may see

Each other one day.

Please don’t forget me I swear

I want to see you again.

© 2012 shadow night


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I started reading this and a few sentences in I decided to read the note before I finished the poem. I'm glad that I did because it changed the feeling dramatically for me. I really like this poem and I really like how you describe a relationship that is not romantic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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it was NOT creepy. But it WAS really good!! it was sweet but not in the romantic way soooooooo Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing creepy about penning about sibling love, I too have an elder brother and love the time we have together. You pen honestly and that is nothing to be ashamed of, line 11 should be were not was. Love the anime pics choosen for your poems, keep em coming

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I started reading this and a few sentences in I decided to read the note before I finished the poem. I'm glad that I did because it changed the feeling dramatically for me. I really like this poem and I really like how you describe a relationship that is not romantic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its not bad i like it and why would u think this would make u a creep

Posted 8 Years Ago


its good

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 1, 2011
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shadow night
shadow night

mansfield, OH



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