The Final Jest

The Final Jest

A Poem by Rodney Carlstrom
"

This one you have to figure out for yourself.

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The Final Jest

 

Cut out the weakness; prolong the sickness,

Corrupt the single minded body; this giant,

Just look me in the eyes and say I'm wrong,

Even though deep inside you know that I'm right,

 

A government for the people and by the people,

No longer exists, it's a flat out lie; the final jest,

They'll smash the ancient scrolls with giant fists,

And bring about the chains of tyranny that instill us,

 

Swallow the bitter pills of ash, blood and fate,

And fall into bed with their lies and justification,

Smile sweetly as the pictures taken,

And cry as the world burns beneath your feet,

 

Your tears will stain the pages of history,

And then they'll see, just like you and me,

That we were manipulated and taken for the fool,

Your slate wiped clean; lost in the sands of time,

 

This is the final warning that shall be given brothers,

Hear the angels harp as it cries out for blood!

Retribution is needed; raise your arms in defense,

Remember to smile politely when they take you away,

 

Dance the dance of death; the final jest,

And sing with me as we bleed for them,

Bittersweet victory, we've won at last!

Glorify the Lord's name and watch them burn in hell.

 

© 2009 Rodney Carlstrom


Author's Note

Rodney Carlstrom
I've been told by a few people that I should drop the last line, because it doesn't fit with the overall poem, or it's too overboard. I'd like a normal review for this piece, but also, what's your input on the last line of the last stanza? Thanks!

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Added on January 28, 2009
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Rodney Carlstrom
Rodney Carlstrom

Noblestucky, IN



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I'm 19, jobless and getting ready to go to college. I love to read, play guitar and hang out with my gorgeous, brilliant and all around amazing girlfriend. I love to write. Lately it's been more songs.. more..

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