Void.

Void.

A Poem by KieraCrimeScene

Oh, what you promised,

love and happiness.

A shining sun,

to warm my soul.

But nothing will ever

warm your cold heart.

I tried to get away,

you refuse to let me,

drift apart.

But then you ran,

ran away,

from tommorow,

and today.

So I'll say it loud,

and clear right now,

I've written void across my face,

I am not valid,

I am not worthy,

a tall tale,

not a story,

Void.

Don't use me.

 

© 2008 KieraCrimeScene


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This one is your best yet. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm impressed with the way you express yourself. Again, very good flow--effective word usage, and powerful emotion. Thanks for sharing this. Nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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wow, I'm 14 now.. and uh, looking back, I friggin' sucked. I don't right poetry anymore, as you can tell because I'm terrible at it. I do essays. I love to write, but uh I can't believe I got good .. more..

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