Thought

A Poem by KieraCrimeScene

About you,

How I want you,

How I need you,

Want to please you,

Can't control it,

Can't ignore it,

I won't push you away,

Don't make us,

yesterday,

thought,

about it,

How much i want it,

how much I need it,

just think about it.

© 2008 KieraCrimeScene

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Adeline

I like this, It sounds like it could be a song, ever thought about writing one? :)

Posted 15 Years Ago

Mystery Girl

Itard to is hard to get controll of our own thoughts. Sometimes they can become our worst emeny! Good poem!

Posted 15 Years Ago

Quill

Nicely done. I like the free flow, like it's spilling right out of your ... .... soul.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Dempsey Wilson (D.L. Wi..

Wow! Very well done! It flowed nicely and was deeply erotic, but in a meaningful way. Powerful!

Posted 15 Years Ago

Dani California

I love this flow. Purely natural spill... all emotions exposed... gently, but powerful. I love free flows.. my fav!! And you did a great job!! Rhyme and flow are superb.

Nice!!

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on June 22, 2008

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wow, I'm 14 now.. and uh, looking back, I friggin' sucked. I don't right poetry anymore, as you can tell because I'm terrible at it. I do essays. I love to write, but uh I can't believe I got good .. more..