Thought

Thought

A Poem by KieraCrimeScene

About you,

How I want you,

How I need you,

Want to please you,

Can't control it,

Can't ignore it,

I won't push you away,

Don't make us,

yesterday,

thought,

about it,

How much i want it,

how much I need it,

just think about it.

© 2008 KieraCrimeScene


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I like this, It sounds like it could be a song, ever thought about writing one? :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Itard to is hard to get controll of our own thoughts. Sometimes they can become our worst emeny! Good poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nicely done. I like the free flow, like it's spilling right out of your ... .... soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Very well done! It flowed nicely and was deeply erotic, but in a meaningful way. Powerful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this flow. Purely natural spill... all emotions exposed... gently, but powerful. I love free flows.. my fav!! And you did a great job!! Rhyme and flow are superb.

Nice!!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 22, 2008

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KieraCrimeScene
KieraCrimeScene

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wow, I'm 14 now.. and uh, looking back, I friggin' sucked. I don't right poetry anymore, as you can tell because I'm terrible at it. I do essays. I love to write, but uh I can't believe I got good .. more..

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