Prepare for Battle

Prepare for Battle

A Poem by kikieatszombies

         Prepare for Battle,

                                    Protect you heart with a cold metal barrier,

                                        a barrier between you and love,

                                    the barrier that stops your blood dead in its tracks.

 

                                   Prepare the ripped cloth that will wrap your wounds,

   the bruises left behind will be a reminder

              to guard your heart,

         to be weary of the unrealistic,

               to Never let anyone in.

 

 

© 2011 kikieatszombies


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kikieatszombies
My first spoken word poem, please give your constructive criticism

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WOW! This is you're first poem? It sure is good! The stanza:
"Prepare the ripped cloth that will wrap your wounds,
the bruises left behind will be a reminder
to guard your heart,
to be weary of the unrealistic,
to Never let anyone in.",
was breath taking. Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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WOW! This is you're first poem? It sure is good! The stanza:
"Prepare the ripped cloth that will wrap your wounds,
the bruises left behind will be a reminder
to guard your heart,
to be weary of the unrealistic,
to Never let anyone in.",
was breath taking. Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this write...
I wouldn't change anything..It says it all the way it is.
I like the forceful nature of it.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm 15 I'm atheist I'm a poet I'm a weirdo I'm a freak and proud of it I'm Kiana more..

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