Alone

Alone

A Poem by Sara
"

started as a song, ended up as a poem.

"
I stand alone here
Alone but not without fear
And I'm determined to make it through
If I can just keep in mind I have you

I stand with you here
There still remains fear
But I know I'll make it through
If I remember I have you

I stand alone here
The fear is shown tonight
As the dread sinks in
I will no longer try to fight
For I made it through
With or without you
Still I am alone, besides my fear
Now I die alone here

© 2010 Sara


Author's Note

Sara
I've been told that this poem is "redundant" but I actually am fond of it, what do you think?

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i think it was well written

Posted 9 Years Ago


Poetry of courage... Strong work... I enjoyed it... And redundant- cut the crappp..

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like it, strong of mind and will.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sara
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