Our Hymn

Our Hymn

A Poem by Kim Jimenez

Our love was enough, But life’s too rough.


Clouded minds,

With beating hearts;
Happiness in maze,
But felt peace in our gaze;

We’re never whole,
To fill each other’s hole;
But we’re the only right,
To our lives full of fright;

The love felt in guilt,
After holding a hilt;
Hearts consistently at war,
Presence of never fading scar;

Romance was never our forte,
Life’s too complicated for Cliché;
Normal lovers have God in their center,
While Death is our answer;

Our love was enough,
But life’s too rough;
In our arms we’ll forever belong,
But death is the hymn of our song.

© 2019 Kim Jimenez

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A wonderful poem. Had the feel of the ancient writers in the words. To master the emotion of love, take a lifetime. We shall fall and rise-up often. The words in the poem, honest and direct. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you Kim for sharing the amazing poetry.

Posted 2 Months Ago

Oh Wow this is so very good! I really enjoyed this well written write, so nicely presented

Posted 5 Months Ago

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Added on August 4, 2019
Last Updated on August 4, 2019
Tags: Love, Life, Death, Depression


Kim Jimenez
Kim Jimenez

Caloocan, NCR, Philippines

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