I shall remain here for ever....

 

 

Darkness is all around me..
i can't see,
i can't feel..
i'm waiting here for a long time, for someone to resque me..
but then,
i felt some one's hand, which hold'd me tight..
and took me to a beautiful place..
where i can see the sky and feel alive..
i wondered what's the place &
founded out it's ur heart...!
I SHALL REMAIN HERE FOR EVER...

 

-Eternal Kim

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

I hope everything is comforable there
in the heart of your choice. Sometimes,
just once in a while, things are not all they
seem.
Should your poem need to be revamped, should
you find a new love, or a new slant on life, do not
be depressed, because that is how life works.

A beautiful little poem, clever use of the language,
stark imagry, integrity and talent.

One of my favorites.

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Vaishali..^_^]

nice one...!very well written....!!
great work...!