Flowers for his grave..

FLOWERS FOR HIS GRAVE...

She took the car,
and a bunch of flowers
Started her journey ...
She knew how all will end,
the end is at the bend....

She went to the first place,
the place were she met him first.
the place were it all begun.
she knelt down, kept a flower there...

she then went to the next place,
were they usually hang around.
it's a wooden park chair
at the end of blue lake.
where they discussed about their future plans
she kept a flower in there...

she went to that red tree,
under that tree was there first kiss!
ground covered with red carpet of leaves,
admist of green meadows
she kept a flower in there...

then she went to this place,
were it was the end of her loved guy
met with an accident and
died in the flood of blood
she kept a flower along with a tear..!

she then finally went to this place,
she parked her car by the side,
dint cared to lock it
and left the door open..

for she knew,
the one final thing to do...
she sat beside his grave,
slowly touched his name,  
carved in his tomb..
kissed that ground
and kept rest all the flowers there,
and she whispered..

""honey i love you!

and i'm coming for you""

                and she died...

she's the best flower, he can ever have....

 

-Eternal Kim

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is just so mind blowing!!!!
This is the first structured and in-depth piece of writing by you which I'm reading and it is just terrific!
Its so sad and dark and the you described about each and every flower was so descriptive!
But the closing lines really left my heart into piece as they are so heart wrenching!
If you ever have some time, then you could read a poem "Your visit to my place" by me...its feel is very similar to this poem...
This was just brilliant and I will surely add this poem to my favorites :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Beautiful story. It was quite sad, but they must be together is in a more pleasant place.
The ending was quite unexpected.

[Kimberly_ eternal dream..]

tis will b my 1st longest poem! i usually writ smal poems.. complete'n in maximum 10 lines..

[Eagle Cruagh]

A nice switch at the end.

I was sure this was another teenage sob session
over some boy she had known for a week.

A very pleasant surprise, this poem has substance,
it is well constructed it actually is quite beautiful.

My favorite !

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow was so amazing...!!very well written...
every thing was just perfect...
i love it...!!great write...!