FEELS LIKE AN ACCIDENT

Sometimes you have to lose your life for you to find it. A troubled hero finds his soul when he loses his life.

I feel like I am driving a rental
Feel like I'm driving to south-hell
It looks like a kid in my headlights
I feel like I'm weightless
Feels like nothing
Feels like
. . .

I feel like my head is a clubhouse
Feel like my body is a temple
Feels like it's in ruins now
It looks like it is pitch black in here
Feels like slow death
Feels like
. . .

It sounds like I saved her life
Feels like I saved my own soul
I feel like I was headed to south-hell
But it feels like I found me first
Feels like I'm losing grip
Feels like
. . .

It feels like I got here by accident
But, it feels like this was not a mistake
I feel like I'm floating
Feels like heaven
Feels like a new lease
I feel like
. . .

I feel like
I found life on my deathbed

Author's Note

I hope you understand
Sometimes you find something where there shouldn't be anything.
I feel like telling a story
I feel like this is the way I need to tell it
I hope you understand

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

yes i understood it perfectly
well written loved the flow loved the repeat words
and loved it,
thanks so much for entry into my what happens when we die comp good luck

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine young poet that I like. The repeats here give this speed, which is perfect for the theme. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem described a tire Kingblaq. I hope you are alright. I felt the struggle and pain in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote