His Wedding Vows

In my room, I fart loudly and freely
I am ill-mannered.
My stereos are always on black people volume
It helps clear my head.
My sense of fashion is meh!
Please, don't be vexed.
Although I suck at remembering dates,
I will always remember your birthday and today's date.

I have a busy mind too,
I can't concentrate on a single topic.
Have you ever seen a baby poodle?
It's the second most beautiful thing is the world.
Of course darling, you rank first!
There's nothing in this world as breathtaking as you
And when you smile, God!
Nothing else matters, I concentrate on you.

With you in the room, I will be more mannered
I will be a real prince
I will unplug the stereos too
Your voice calms me
I will always dress up for you

But before you take this ring from me
I need you to know this one thing
There's something I would not change for you.
Because no matter how hopeless it gets,
I will NEVER stop loving you.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Farting and wedding vows. I did like the honest tone of the words. I believe, we must be honest and true at the beginning and at the ending. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote