Je suis Charlie

Larmes me hanter le meurtre insensé de ceux et celles qui osent

Un meurtre du galet suiveur sera de prendre
la vie d'entre nous qui parlent
des fois que maintenir le présent suite
bien dormir ces âmes que mal la nuit.

Author's Note

L'honnêteté

Reviews

[kclyaine]

Murder of follower will take
life of us who speak
times that maintain this result
sleep well these souls that bad night.

I can't speak or understand french. So I have google translate it. I'm not sure it's accurate though, the translation. I don't really know, but I don't think that murder should be the best option on how to deal with religious stuff.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

Tu dis la vérité. Charlie Hebdo ne saleura pas le terreur, and neither should we.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Merci and be well

[alanwgraham]

Well done. Addressing these issues is so important. We have to dig deep into causes if we are to make us all safer.
I can understand the solidarity of using the French here but a translation would make this important message more accessible.
I have also written about this issue in my short story 'A tale of two cafes'
Thanks, Alan

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed thank you

[Sami Khalil]

A resounding poem with truth to behold...:).......

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Dayran]

Une belle mounsier de sentiment ... jusqu'à ce qu'ils atteignent la nuit du sommeil.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Merci x x x x x x x x x

[A Ghost of Myself]

I just had a conversation about this, the title alone told me what its about. I admit I ran it through a translator, and I imagine the words are nowhere near literal translation, it's hard to give a review on this. Based on the title and that alone, its a testament or vigil to the Paris Massacre, calling for unity amongst the masses. I debated about leaving a review on a piece I don't fully understand if, but if means 'what I think' it means,' I wish to show my support.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[dillonjensen]

Had to translate it, but powerful words, Thomas. Je suis Charlie.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Saddam]

Out of my mind but by the translation it seems nice. Thanks for sharing your work my friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Chris]

Tears haunt us all... why would such as they even THINK God would reward cowardly murderers? Where is the bravery in an execution - surely not in the action of the headman.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed my good man thank you

[Valentine]

I had French in school, I was taken out of typing because my fingers couldn't type...still not very good at it. As for the French..I got an A but years have passed and my mind is a blank. Sorry..Valentine

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Do not worry my darling, it's a mere message to those taken away.