Daisy Double.

Daisy Double.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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As I've been cranking out the darker dept's of my mind lately, i decided to write something a little less, fire and brimstone - enjoy.

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Two little daisy's, 
Alone in the grass,
Shaken and stirred,
By this very lass,
Small to the eye,
Large to the mind,
Smooth to the touch, 
A touch that is kind,
Blossom is late,
For this time of year,
It will come forth,
Never you fear.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas, now this write of yours I really love. Didn't know you had a soft side. Valentine

Posted 3 Years Ago


Thomas Fitzgerald

3 Years Ago

Ha Ha thank you.
Sorry, I pressed submit on the first review before I finished it. I shall continue;
it made me think of a little playing in a field of daisy's in complete happiness. "Never you fear," that line holds so much hope.
All in all, such a beautiful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this; I loved the rhyme it made it flow so well. The whole thing was so beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love it! It tells a simple story, but makes it sound rather unique intriguing! Great job! :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's a typo in the second line you meant to type As on in the grass I think. This poem is touching the meaning I derived from it was patience, every flower bud (metaphorical buds included) will blossom one day.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love your venturesome attitude with your poetry. You explore new things I see. This one's great!

Posted 9 Years Ago


very injoyable


Posted 9 Years Ago


Loving this sweet side of you!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


simplistic, but still blooms beautifully!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This shows you can write poems that aren't all dark and sinister, and you can write things that are a lot happier and to the same standard :) Great write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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