. . . to put it into words . . .

. . . to put it into words . . .

A Story by Thomas Fitzgerald
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a study of words we keep using

"

. . . A fear is no longer a fear if you don't fear it . . .

 

 

. . . Is love really a love if it can't grow . .

 

 

. . . Sound isn't heard unless it is felt . . .

 

 

. . . Politeness is scapegoat for jealousy / anger / revenge . . .

 

 

. . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . .

 

 

. . . Does love end in death? - Simply no . . .

 

 

. . . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . .

 

 

. . . What is the outcome of falling in love? Some say "respect" others "managing", I say harmony . . .

 

© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Well I think I have fixed the typo's!

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I absolutely have great respect for peices like this one. So much thought, so much meaning all expressed in the simplest of ways. A simple path that hits your heart and mind in places that make you feel and think about what is being delivered by the writer.
WELL DONE!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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ponder of words with flowing ideas
=]

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked it, didn't see any typos, and agree with everything but the politeness is scapegoat line. Maybe I'm overly optimistic though :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It looks fix to me and I love it. Really all the lines just speak their own things and though, and you're right. ITs a good format and spoken voice of your own. Anyways well done, I'm speechless.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely interpreted, sort of a yin-yang mix, wonderfully experimented

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Superb!
". . The thin line between love and hate - what would be its name? - fear . . ."...what a line!!!
♥ Mwah!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh it is beautiful. A really well done story and it touches me deep inside my heart and soul how you portray this little story on falling in love. Lovely indeed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I very much like this, the ideas behind it are quite simple, yet if you think about them for long, they become quite complicated. I especially love the first, second and fourth lines, though the fourth is my favorite. It's so very true!! Wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow!

very deep and well-thought out indeed

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I echo what EmeraldFacet said--definitely worthy of respect. This piece is beautiful and thought-provoking, two prime elements in any writing.

I especially liked, ". . . You cannot choose who you fall in love with you can only love them . . ."
True indeed.



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well done indeed! You expressed so much in such a creative brilliant way!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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