A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald

A study of me.

Tommy was bold, 
Tommy was cute,
Tommy was fine,
Tommy played flute.

Gay was Tommy,
Sexy was Tommy,
Men he had Tommy,
Afraid he wasn't Tommy.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald

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I really enjoyed that little contrast you had, as if the first stanza described childhood Tommy, and the second one described the grown up Tommy. And also the way you described the childhood innocence, and then a little bit of adult naughtiness, and also your happiness and high self-esteem, and this shows how important it is to love oneself. I love this succinct write, and yet there is great meaning behind it. I enjoyed reading.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


very unique in delivering it
it proposes a complete irony

Posted 8 Years Ago

Creative and unique description of yourself in a interesting format. Loved it!

Posted 8 Years Ago

you know yourself quite well
brief yet analytical

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very unique way of describing oneself, brilliantly done!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Well this is certainly a different way of viewing oneself! Different......ballsy.......but brillent! I loved it! Very good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Simple but splendid! That's Tommy. Nice read

Posted 8 Years Ago

interesting I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago

Interesting, simple, and a little confusing, but I liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

really effective. basically saying piss off to anybody who says otherwise. i like it. and besides whats more amazing than a gay man! i mean there so much fun and theyre awsome! lol great job bud :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

This format is fun.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 18, 2011
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Thomas Fitzgerald

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