Perfection.

A study of religion.

Pray to heaven,

Forsake a hell,

Making noises,

A man to tell,

A hollow dome, 

A marble altar,

Smoking incense,

Amen to falter.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[.:Arianna:.]

Great write, I love the way your words unfold, it's contradicting and unique.

[Judy Ponceby]

Thought provoking. Enjoyed reading this. Flowed very well, Well done.

[Andrea Vargas]

And i say I love it this is going in my library!

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Short and to the point.

[Vanny]

The poem itself was great, the last lines clinched it. I like the darkness conveyed in your writes. Well thought out and well written. -S

[R Lee Cline]

Sometimes much is said with only a few words.....Well done...Lee

[Hugh O'Donoghue]

lovely!

[Tommy]

I can relate to this, seems that every time I really try to change I just say, “Amen to falter.”

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

[Fabric Pulse]

LOVE your flow of it. It speaks loud and clear, precise and centered.

[Elena]

Love the way you used rhyming here!