Suspect.

Suspect.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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The sad reality of most of us.

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Guided hands envelop the strings of the heart,

Mirrored thoughts leave times behind us all,

Glaring eyes are softened with hopes carress,

Flutters stem the right for us to kiss not fall.

 

Piercing pains neither hurt nor scar within me,

Sliding feelings print minds away from hell,

Religious ceremony bound to smiles forever,

The seal for both are the dings of the bell.

 

Parents ripped apart by wanting lust,

Fear rising in single hearts slapped and shoved,

Catch another in heat and passion lay,

Once nerves and hands no longer loved.

 

Laying still in wooden boxes no better,

Finally of the same stature and respect,

Dead the only cleanser that never fails,

Each other mere people of tragic suspect.

© 2011 Thomas Fitzgerald


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Try to be as honest as possible.

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Most people don't realize this, but I find great peace an beauty through the mysterious and unexplainable emotion of sadness. This poem is incredibly and irrevocably filled with the truth of people's lives that most of society attempts to cover up. In a nutshell, this poem is really beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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i find the first two lines in the second stanza very powerful. it shows how someone can have the strength to let go of pain and evade scars of some emotional traumas. this is a difficult thing to do; to walk it off. but it;s good to have a reminder now and then. poignant and insightful poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Thanks and good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved this piece. It was a nice poem. I think you did a great job on this piece. I loved the message. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's things like this that make me wish I had more talent as a writer.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem is pretty good. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


cool poem I though I was deep but you got me beat =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Really sad, but written with such a poetic beatuy of words. We all have to live and own up to whatever way we decide to live our lives.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really brilliant work. I like whole writing. I like Ireland. Keep it up... God bless you!... Lucky!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is incredible! I really really loved this

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an exceptional poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thomas Fitzgerald

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