The Shoe!

The Shoe!

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
"

This is the response to a challenge laid down by none other than my dear sweet friend Muse - I do hope I didn't dissapoint!

"

This blasted tyrant with corest holds,

A memory longs for times of old,

When feet were fit for the sofest ground,

Dear women thread without a sound.

 

Animals hide does sheath the rough soles,

Merry men wash dirt into hollow bowls,

Pesky pins never far from needle friends,

Arch's soften to house slight softened bends.

 

Jimmy Choo works more and more fast,

Within leather moulds the jail is cast,

High heels for some and flat for few,

Damn the dreaded bright leather shoe!

© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
A little out of my comfort zone, but I ejoyed the challenge!

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Muse, you got some abstract challenges, and your picture is the coolest glitter I think I've ever seen XD And the poem, Thomas, was entertainment and brought about some ideas. Definantly an in depth outlook upon the dreaded bright leather shoe ;) XD Really well written with a fast paced flow, I enjoyed reading, thanx for writing ^.^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Haha, definetly funny! I love it so much! Absolutely one of my favorites, and now I feel like using the title "The Shoe!" for my many expressions to my friends. Really well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rhyming was probably the best. Very cute.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 quatrains, AABB rhyme scheme ... how can i not like it?! xD Great job, i can see you've worked hard on it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

out of your zone yes, out of your reach, I think not! nice piece :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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wow i love the rhyming... you just made it percfect..


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A "challenge"? For you? I doubt it. Great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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oh, how i love my Jimmy Choos!!! great poem Thomas, nice to see the rhyme in couplets, very few write rhyme like that but when its done well like this it is stunning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


cool depiction of such a simple object

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did a mighty fine job, Thomas. As an admitted shoe obsessed woman, I thoroughly enjoyed this write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I enjoyed this one, Thomas the rhyme is splendid, challenges are great...

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Thomas Fitzgerald
Thomas Fitzgerald

Wexford, Leinster, Ireland



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