The Dance Of Words

The Shallimar is a new form created by Shallimar Rose from myspace. It is simply 4 x 4 x 4.

Poetry is
The dance of words
Across the page
And to your heart
~
The soul reflects…
The rays of hope
Fade fast without
Love’s inner strength
~
When all is done
What have we won?
How do we make
Our dreams be real?
~
I get it now
And so I shine
The light of hope
I find within
~
Mike Carson
12-18-2007
~
A Shallimar

Reviews

[Pakino]

Like the flow. Its great to notice a poem talking just about poems :)

[E. M. Murren]

I really like this. It flows gracefully from one transition to another. Well done.