WHY

WHY

A Poem by Olive Belikov

Why did this happen?
I can't believe this.
She laid there restless
With a gash on her wrist.
I ran to her in panic...she made no sound
My heart began to uncontrollably pound. 
Tears streamed down my face
I began to shake.
Thoughts were running through my mind
PLEASE HELP FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!
There was nothing I could do
There was nothing I could say
I knew this was the end
She lay there breathless...dead..

© 2010 Olive Belikov


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This is one question we may never find the answer, I can feel the emotion of what it’s like to be on the other side, that sense of helpless without a solution in the end we find there’s nothing we can do but pray and put it in the lords hands.
Excellent write.


Posted 10 Years Ago


great job! full of emotion and heart break.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, that is so sad! It made me cry.It's sad but it is very good. Thanks for the friend request. I accepted it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, I hope this wasn't a real-life experience, but you did an amazing job of portraying the shock, terror and grief. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ok, i really like the intensity of this poem, it had me reading the poem faster and faster as i read it!
theres really nothing i would change of this :)

cool,
-marissa

Posted 10 Years Ago


So tragic and very powerful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The emotion is so powerful in this poem.. It's really well written and heartbreaking..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2010
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Olive Belikov
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I am a daughter, a sister, a grand-daughter, a niece, a cousin, a friend. I am a partner, a student, a young girl, and a grown woman. I am confident and scared, terrified and excited. I am loving and .. more..

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