WHY

WHY

A Poem by Olive Belikov

Why did this happen?
I can't believe this.
She laid there restless
With a gash on her wrist.
I ran to her in panic...she made no sound
My heart began to uncontrollably pound. 
Tears streamed down my face
I began to shake.
Thoughts were running through my mind
PLEASE HELP FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!
There was nothing I could do
There was nothing I could say
I knew this was the end
She lay there breathless...dead..

© 2010 Olive Belikov


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This is one question we may never find the answer, I can feel the emotion of what it’s like to be on the other side, that sense of helpless without a solution in the end we find there’s nothing we can do but pray and put it in the lords hands.
Excellent write.


Posted 8 Years Ago


great job! full of emotion and heart break.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow, that is so sad! It made me cry.It's sad but it is very good. Thanks for the friend request. I accepted it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow, I hope this wasn't a real-life experience, but you did an amazing job of portraying the shock, terror and grief. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


ok, i really like the intensity of this poem, it had me reading the poem faster and faster as i read it!
theres really nothing i would change of this :)

cool,
-marissa

Posted 8 Years Ago


So tragic and very powerful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The emotion is so powerful in this poem.. It's really well written and heartbreaking..

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2010
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Olive Belikov
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I am a daughter, a sister, a grand-daughter, a niece, a cousin, a friend. I am a partner, a student, a young girl, and a grown woman. I am confident and scared, terrified and excited. I am loving and .. more..

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