WHY

Why did this happen?
I can't believe this.
She laid there restless
With a gash on her wrist.
I ran to her in panic...she made no sound
My heart began to uncontrollably pound. 
Tears streamed down my face
I began to shake.
Thoughts were running through my mind
PLEASE HELP FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!
There was nothing I could do
There was nothing I could say
I knew this was the end
She lay there breathless...dead..

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

This is one question we may never find the answer, I can feel the emotion of what it’s like to be on the other side, that sense of helpless without a solution in the end we find there’s nothing we can do but pray and put it in the lords hands.
Excellent write.

[Sunflower 20]

great job! full of emotion and heart break.

[Brook Hughes]

wow, that is so sad! It made me cry.It's sad but it is very good. Thanks for the friend request. I accepted it!

[reminder]

Wow, I hope this wasn't a real-life experience, but you did an amazing job of portraying the shock, terror and grief. Well done!

[just take a breath]

ok, i really like the intensity of this poem, it had me reading the poem faster and faster as i read it!
theres really nothing i would change of this :)

cool,
-marissa

[Lorame]

So tragic and very powerful.

[Paradoxical]

The emotion is so powerful in this poem.. It's really well written and heartbreaking..