Left Uncovered

Left Uncovered

A Poem by KJVollaro
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Contest piece...22 syllables

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Footsteps in the walls

Responding to my calls

Dropping stones towards hell

Unleashed what's in the well.

 

 

 

© 2008 KJVollaro


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it's like a warning one might find carved in old granite

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ken you are a great writer in all that you do. I like this poem the most for I the reader feels tormented by thoughts...that's what I got out of it...keep up the great work....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job with this. It instantly reminded me, in tone, of the short story "The Monkey's Paw" by W.W. Jacobs: What you wish for does not always turn out to be what you expect, in fact your greatest wish can bring about your worst nightmare. You captured a sense of foreboding, terror, and guilt quite well in a very concise way. You definitely have talent, Mister.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well done. The flow and rhyme is excellent. Wonderfully penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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KJVollaro
KJVollaro

Warren, RI



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