Reflections

A short minimalism attempt about a rather bad relationship I was previously in.

Uncontrollable anxiety

  Fear of love and self

    Craving your presence

      Here yet not

       

        You belong to another.....

           Obstacles many

              Here I am

                The bed is cold

                     Lust with no release

                              Ease your guilt with money

                                     It helps you sleep

         A kiss under the mist

                                                             

                          A boat forever lost

Author's Note

Any and all feedback would be appreciated!

Reviews

[Kerra]

this is quite intriguing but nicely written

[Just Kim]

deep powerful write, nicely done