Someday Soon In The Future

You suddenly complete me

Someday, we’ll be as close as two strangers sitting under a light post

Both sharing the glow of the night

While not caring who is wrong and who is right

Simply sitting on the park bench together, we’ll remember most

 

Going nowhere, I’ll purely see, that love’s hands have given you to me.

 

Soon, we’ll be as happy as two artists arranging a place to fall

For if our love should ever be in the dust

We’ll pick it back up where we left off if we must

For we’ll surely find a place to hang our love’s portrait on the wall

 

Going somewhere, we’ll wholly be, knowing that love’s eyes have seen us free.

 

In the future, we’ll be as thoughtful as two thunderous voices in the rain

Telling our secrets to each other with such ease

As we dance, play and carelessly stumble, landing upon our knees

For nothing can get us down, gazing at the drizzle on the distant plane  

 

Going everywhere, you’ll wistfully heed, that love’s heart has given us its seed. 

Author's Note

I hope and wish for this to be true. For someday soon in the future, hopefully I'll finally find true love. Also the picture is by the famous photographer- Robert Doisneau.

Reviews

[Onyx_Rayne]

Very beautifully written... amazing flow and lovely imagery.

"Going somewhere, we'll wholly be, knowing that love's eyes have seen us free"

I feel like we all have a destiny in love... sometimes, it takes us a while to find it and we take some wrong turns along the way, but "love's eyes" know where that destiny lies.

Gorgeous write :)

[Rita MacGumerait]

Very beautiful, very nice. I think you had a nice balance in your poem. i enjoyed your single line stanza throughout it that changed with the lines before it, it was as if I was going on this trip with you. It was very nice. I hope you find someone to fit this!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

eloquent~ beautifully written poetic~

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[619girl]

I love this! it's poetic and meaningful! Maybe there is hope for the world! A very beautiful and inspiring write! :)

[Crow]

Very well done, this shines with the light of youth and love.

[Shante Payne]

Awh this is very very sweet. I enjoyed every bit of it. We all wish that love will shed a little light on us one day and give us what our souls need. Thanks for sharing.

[mirabella]

Lovely flow and idea to this! I hope your wish comes true! :)
The format works well too, with the quatrains and the one liners, and I always love rhymes that work and your do! :)

[Haifa]

Wonderful and lovely poem, I like it so much. It's all about sweet love, that's cute. I read your note, I hope it becomes true already. Very well done.

[Frifthor (D^2)]

I love the premise here, that your trying to talk to someone through the poem, as opposed to just communicating an idea. A very well written piece.