Memories

Every moment of the day
Is a treasure unseen
It's a beautiful memory

In the future to come

The moments that matter

Hold them dear

The moments that don't

Forget them, and move on

A new year has come

And it will soon go

Make memories of today

Cherish them close

In the future years

You'll look back with a smile

Wrapped up in those long ago moments

Beautiful, beautiful memories <3

Author's Note

Dedicated not only to this new year that has begun, but to my sister who said, "Cherish the moments that matter and forget the ones that don't." (:

Reviews

[Sourav]

It's so sweet and nice. With such simplicity you've described a strong truth. Love it.

[Jack Isaac]

[random review] A good poem is one that you will always remember reading. The wisdom imparted in this write is certainly memorable... very nicely put in the second stanza. I have to say, no pun intended, the last two lines wrap up this sentiment into a memorable package. Nice writing!

[Missy Moooooo]

Awh very nice poem :)

[eliasstone]

very nice.

[Sujash I. Purna]

"Cherish the moments that matter and forget the ones that don't."

such a sage quote and I loved the poem that has been inspired by it. Talented work indeed!

My favourite lines:

The moments that matter
Hold them dear
The moments that don't
Forget them, and move on

Kudos again :)

[Krystal Nicole]

great write!! Very well writen and I love the meaning behind it!!! Great job!

[kink]

dat feels soothin... light stuff ..you are good :)

[WhiteWillow]

You are wise beyond your years. A simple message beautifully conveyed.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

A new year has come
And it will soon go
Make memories of today
Cherish them close

.....................................................................beautiful lines, I like your poem.
lively moments are great to a human mind and race. with regards.

[Archia]

The last line almost doesn't flow with the rest of the poem, sudden almost. But that's what makes it so good, it's like it has it's own impact, I'm not really sure what, but it's a good thing. I really enjoyed the message in this, it's a beautiful one.