Love Poem

Love Poem

A Poem by kayla

I know that this is right,

that this is what I want to do,

and the smile on your face

shows that you want this too.

Your smile so beautiful,

joy radiating off your face,

your smile so contagious

that I can't help but do the same.

These are the times I treasure,

just laying here with you,

feeling the heat from your body,

seeing how happy I make you.

But sometimes I wonder and worry,

because after all, I am human.

I worry about if it will last,

and for just how soon?

Will it last a lifetime,

or just a few years?

I get second thoughts,

sometimes leaving me in tears,

I worry am I good enough

for someone like you,

because my confidence falters

and I wonder if yours does too?

Don't get me wrong,

I'm madly in love;

I just worry and overthink

just like anyone.

You make me feel happy

and leave me feeling free;

in your arms, against your chest

is where I want to be.

 

© 2012 kayla


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C.
You're such a great writer :) I love all the stuff you've written. It really has some really great, relatable emotions that are written from the heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amazing, so sweet and ... guess the best word to describe it, is "human" !
All your thoughts are easy to relate to for people in love, you've done a great job showing feelings, though with such a title and theme you could have gone "wilder", more "theatrical", don't be shy with words, you're a poet !! =D

Posted 11 Years Ago


The emotion is this pulsates through the computer screen. Very nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Always doubt in the emotion of love. When heart is content. We have many concerns. I like your thoughts and concerns in the poem. I like the positive ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


awwwwwwwwwww lovely .....great job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very lovely, dear! Your musings over love and the future made me smile. If only we could see into the future; could see if love has an expiration date! The only advice I can give you is cherish your every moment with him, because you never know what is just around the bend.
Bravo!

Kindest regards and best of luck,
Savannah

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 30, 2012
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Tags: love, romance, worry, anxious, peace, hope, joy, poem, rhymne, poetry

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kayla
kayla

Los Angeles, CA



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Becoming active on this site again! Originally started my account as teenager, but am a young woman now with hopefully still just as much to say. I write mostly poetry (but occasionally short stori.. more..

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